ПОМОГИТЕ ПРОВЕРИТЬ ГРАМОТНОСТЬ В АНГЛИЙСКОМ СОЧИНЕНИИ.

There is a lot of methods to conduct spare time:exhibition,walk on a park,theatre and cinema. Someone likes to walk in the cinema and to someone in the theatre.Let us discuss this theme.
I agree with opinion those people which choose a theatre. First,in theatre special atmosphere:play of actors,bewitching decoration and audience.The people visiting theatre behave intelligent.Second,in theatre playing real people.It allows to carry on dialogue of actors with spectators during performance.Atmosphere becomes more live and interesting to spectators.What is more,in a theatre there is great choice of genres which will not see in the cinema:from ballet to operetta.It gives a theatre individuality.
Bat there are people whiche like to in the cinema.First,in cinema it is possible to get tickets at the low price.That is why in the cinema visits more people, than theatre.What is more,in the cinema wide choise of films.It gives the cinema popularity.
Bat on the other hand,It is possible to tell that the choice between theatre or cinema depends on character человека.If the person loves quiet atmosphere and an intelligent society, to it in theatre. If noisy and cheerful, to it at cinema. Besides, the choice depends on mood. Everyone makes the choice.