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• Алина, 17.02.12 20:36
  
  Dear Ann
  Hi I am sorry I have not written for so long. I want to tell you about my favorite film which is called Eurotrip. This film is a comedy/ This film is about teenagers/ Two guys go to Europe because the main character has a penpal. The penpal wants to go but the character thinks that his penpal is a guy,but it's not a guy so the main character goes to Europe with his friends.
  I have seen this film by myself and with a friend/ This film is good but if you're into more serious films, Eurotrip is not for you/ This film has good soundtracks in it/ This film is quite relaxing/Now tell me about your favorite film.
  как-то так. Когда говорите куда кто-то поехал не надо the.The ставится только перед некоторыми местами не не странами.
• *Надя* 17.02.12 03:56
  
  хочу немного подправить)) я хорошо разбираюсь в английском, так что ..
  Dear Ann,
  Hi, I'm sorry for not writing for a long time. I would like to tell you about my favourite movie Eurotrip. This comedy is about the teenagers. Two guys went to the Europe to meet a pen friend. Pen friends name was Mike and she wanted to come to USA, but the main character thought that Mike is gay boy. When he found out that she is a woman he wanted to explain her that he made a mistake and went to Europe with his friend.
  I watched this movie with my friend. This movie is very funny, but if you prefer more serious movies then Eurotrip is not for you. The soundtracks are well matched, so this movie is fascinating. Now tell me about your favourite movie.
• malashka-kashka 16.02.12 14:02
  
  название фильма пишется без артикля. просто Eurotrip.
  и название Европа тоже без артикля. просто Two guys go to Europe. А pen pal надо заменить на pen friend так как это слово более употребимо, хотя как вам нравится.
  в остальном Vanessa2903 молодец. она все верно сделала
• *Latifa* 15.02.12 21:04

  ответ для: Femina

  
  аааа, тогда просто wanted to come, или даже лучше wanted to visit the main hero и можно даже указать имя героя. а то как то везде хироу да хироу. не красиво, на мой взгляд.
• Femina 15.02.12 20:53

  ответ для: *Latifa*

  
  

  Vanessa2903 писал(а): The pen pal wants to go. так я не поняла что это значит. давайте тоже изменим. просто я если честно не понимаю что вы этой фразой хотели сказать.

  
  я имела ввиду хотел приехать, а как это лучше сказать??
• *Latifa* 15.02.12 20:05
  
  The pen pal wants to go. так я не поняла что это значит. давайте тоже изменим. просто я если честно не понимаю что вы этой фразой хотели сказать.
• Femina 15.02.12 20:00

  ответ для: *Latifa*

  
  

  Vanessa2903 писал(а): Dear Ann Hi I am sorry I have not written for so long. I want to tell you about my favorite film. It is a Eurotrip. This film is a comedy/ it is about teenagers/ Two guys go to the Europe because the hero has a pen pal. The pen pal wants to go это я не поняла. куда он вонтс ту го??? but the hero thinks that his pen pal is a guy, but he was wrong and found out that is was a beautiful girl, so the hero goes to the Europe with friend to find this girl from the internet. I have seen this film alone and with friend/ It is fine but if you like serious movies then Eurotrip is not for you. the soundtracks in the film are very nice. And in general the movie is very relaxing. Tell me about your favorite film. ну как то так. но я позволила себе изменить немного предложения, не только грамматику, потому что показалось мне уж больно примитивно. если что не так извините.

  
  Спасибо большое
• *Latifa* 15.02.12 19:55
  
  Dear Ann
  Hi I am sorry I have not written for so long. I want to tell you about my favorite film. It is a Eurotrip. This film is a comedy/ it is about teenagers/ Two guys go to the Europe because the hero has a pen pal. The pen pal wants to go (это я не поняла. куда он вонтс ту го???) but the hero thinks that his pen pal is a guy, but he was wrong and found out that is was a beautiful girl, so the hero goes to the Europe with friend to find this girl from the internet.
  I have seen this film alone and with friend/ It is fine but if you like serious movies then Eurotrip is not for you. the soundtracks in the film are very nice. And in general the movie is very relaxing. Tell me about your favorite film.
  ну как то так. но я позволила себе изменить немного предложения, не только грамматику, потому что показалось мне уж больно примитивно. если что не так извините.