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• Ланком 13.08.13 19:07
  
  My name is Alsou. I am eighteen years old. I would like to tell you about my family.
  There are four people in my family: a father, a mother, and younger brother me First of all, I would like to tell you about myself.
  I study at college on the 4th course. I like to read books, to listen to music, to watch TV,to play computer games and to ride a bike.
  My mother’s name is Guzel. My Mummy is forty-one. She is a crane operator.
  She is very beautiful, kind, clever, hardworking.
  My father’s name is Risat. My Dad is forty-seven. He is a driver. He is kind and hardworking.
  My younger brother’s name is Ainur. He is eleven years old. He studies at school in the fifth grade. My younger brother likes to play football ,computer games and to ride a bike.
  Our family is very friendly. We like to spend time together. In summer we go to the river for swimming. In the winter we go skiing and skating.
  I love my family very much.
• Kissssa710 13.08.13 18:40
  
  Вот мне проще весь текст переписать, чем все ошибки разбирать))
• Алсик890 13.08.13 18:33

  ответ для: MNOPRST

  
  я в колледже учусь.
• MNOPRST 13.08.13 18:31
  
  вы в каком классе?